Thursday, December 17, 2015

Post eight...feedback on my past post.

       As weird as it is, I rearead my post and thought about it as if I were somebody else. My thought process on it is that I could have done better. I thought to give some sense on context as to what is happening in the "current" time in the book, however, I'm not so sure it worked. Maybe for the next post, I'll have a go at the "past" time in the book. It's worth a shot trying both, right? Also, confession. Initially I wasn't palnning on attempting to write from the perspective of Sethe, I was going to write from the perspective of Beloved, but because Beloved doesn't have a completely defined identity, I didn't want to royally screw her character up. As I continue to work on this project, I am getting more frustrated because I feel like I'm not doing good enough. I don't want to disappoint my professor, and I do want him to know that I am trying very hard and have worked on this project alone already about 79 hours worth, of just writing and scractching out ideas. It is more difficult then I thought. Maybe he will see how hard I've worked by the end of it. Well, back to the drawing board..not literally a drawing board...more of a writing down more ideas in my journal, scratching out bad ones and attempting to add decent ones.

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